Nearly a year and a half ago, I undertook to read through Asimov's
classic sci-fi series,
Foundation, and write about the books.
This is one of several sci-fi series that I decided to read,
including Frank Herbert's
Dune series (which I bailed on after
4 books), Arthur C. Clarke's
Rama
series (which I also bailed on after 2 books), and James SA Corey's
The Expanse series (of
which I am currently reading the sixth book and will likely
continue). One of the major differences that I see in these series
are those that were planned to be series of novels (or even novels to
begin with) and those that were not. Corey's series was planned to
be a long-running series from the start, and the novels show it.
Each novel is more or less complete on its own, but they also build
to a broader arc across the novels. The novels serve more as
episodes than as simple stand-alones, meaning that you could read
just one of the novels without the others, but it would make more
sense to read them together.
These other series, though (I am
necessarily leaving out a lot of other series and authors I could
include, but this is the choice I am making), seem to be caught by
surprise by their own sequels. That is, the sequels must pick up
after a conclusion has been reached in the predecing book, and not
always convincingly. Both Herbert and Asimov get around this problem
by jumping hundreds or thousands of years into the future. This way,
there is no messy character continuity to keep up and any narrative
gaps can be explained by the chronological gap. The exception to
this is that Herbert keeps bringing Duncan Idaho back from the dead
for some reason.
When I catch myself wondering if
I am being overly harsh in judging these authors for returning to
worlds that may be personal or fan favorites, and may well have
proven lucrative as well, I just keep remembering all of the series I
have quit reading for one reason or another. I also think about the
nose-dives that some of these series take. Redezvous with
Rama, for example, may be one of
my favorite golden era sf books, but Rama
II was enough to stop
me in my tracks. Likewise, The Forever War
by Joe Haldeman is a personal favorite while Forever Peace
is merely okay and I haven't yet tried to get into Forever
Free. I also think about the
series I have loved. Kim Stanley Robinson's Mars trilogy
and the book of short fiction that followed remains among my favorite
novels. The same is true for Cixin Liu's Remembrance of
Earth's Past series. So it isn't
the form of the sequel itself that is bad. There are a lot of
writers who can beautifully pull off continuing novels in a fictional
world.
To bring this back to my original
topic, Asimov must have felt a bit like Arthur Conan Doyle
resurrecting Sherlock Holmes after killing him off in returning the
galaxy of Foundation.
After all, he had written the series to an end in Foundation
and Earth that was, if not
completely satisfying, at least conclusive. Prelude to
Foundation takes up Hari
Seldon's rise to prominence on Trantor and his early adventures.
Some of it is good and, as a stand-alone novel, it has its charms.
However when taken in the context of the rest of the series, it
leaves a little wanting.
Prelude to Foundation
takes place first chronologically in the Foundation series,
but it was written second-to-last. At the beginning of the novel,
Seldon has traveled to Trantor and delivered a paper on
psychohistory. This immediately catches the attention of Cleon I,
emperor of the Galactic Empire. Seldon presentation proved the
science of psychohistory as theoretically possible but Cleon thought
that this meant that Seldon could predict the future and brings
Seldon to him in order to gain his services. Hari resists,
explaining that there is no practical application for the science and
that it might take his entire lifetime to actually apply it.
Disappointed Cleon lets him go
but instructs his right-hand to keep tabs on Seldon so that they can
take him back when they can use him. Seldon is rescued from his
surveillance by a friendly stranger who then helps to keep him in
hiding for most of the rest of the novel.
Seldon ends up traveling to
varied parts of Trantor to stay ahead of imperial reach and there is
a lot of local flavor type interactions that haven't aged well.
Seldon creeps on women and he meets a kid whose speech wouldn't be
out of place in a Horatio Alger novel. In the end (no worries, I
won't spoil it), Seldon already knows where things will end up in
Foundation and Earth,
even though this takes place several thousand years after his death.
This is the problem of prequels.
There is no real tension in the danger that Seldon faces because I
have already read five novels in which he plays a major role and know
that he doesn't die yet. Granted, he dies in the opening pages of
Foundation, but by
then his mark is made and his influence extends millennia. Next,
Asimov retcons “foreshadowing” of events that take place far in
the narrative future, but which the reader has already experienced if
they are reading in publication order. This generally doesn't read
well and it seems more like an aging rock group begrudgingly playing
the hit they wrote 30 years prior than an authentic narrative
embellishment. There are then also the connections that Asimov wants
to make between Foundation
and his Robot series.
This connection seemed unnecessary in Foundation and Earth
and it leads to more phony foreshadowing in this novel, too. I
haven't read enough of the Robot series
to know how this affects that series, but perhaps I will head to
those books after this series is done to find out for myself.
Also, and most damningly, Asimov
tries to be funny in this book. For all that I admire in Asimov's
writing, it is never for his wit. See, on Trantor there is a rival
faction to the Emperor and that is Wye sector. More than once, a
character will mention the name “Wye” and the interlocutor will
proceed to give an unneeded and unasked-for explanation, thinking the
first character was asking, “Why?” They are homonyms, get it!
I've shit on this book enough.
There are things that I liked about it. Hari Seldon has been a force
in this whole series but he has been distant. As I mentioned, he
dies very early in the series and he just keeps showing up as a
pre-recorded hologram. But here, he is an actual character, and he
is one of Asimov's more dynamic and round ones. Beyond this, he is a
moral character who wants to both do the right thing and stand by his
science. The narrative itself is cohesive and shows Asimov's
inventiveness in creating these different sectors with different
traditions and styles. There are a couple of genuine surprises that
kept the novel interesting and it ended up being an enjoyable read.
I won't say that this is my
favorite in the series, but it was serviceable. I have one more book
to go before I can put this series to bed and I'm not sure what to
expect from it. I suspect that it will be a grab bag, a little like
this novel is. I know that it follows Hari's story between the end
of this novel and the beginning of Foundation,
but I don't know what time period it covers. I am hoping that there
will be a bit more explanation of psychohistory and I am really
hoping that it doesn't go in a direction that undoes what made
Foundation great.