Book notes, part 2

 Back in June I decided to take some time off from writing in this blog.  I was still working my old job, which demanded a lot of hours, and I was not feeling inspired to keep up with much.  However, as I kept reading, I made some notes about the books.  They aren’t much, some are just impressions, but this includes some books that I would have liked to have explored more fully in posts.  I thought that I would post a collection of these here and maybe this will inspire me to go back and write more about them.

Note: I ended up with more than I thought for some of these so I decided to split them up.  Here are 4 more of them.

Artemis by Andy Weir

Andy Weir loves smart ass narrators.  The protagonist/narrator of Artemis shares a lot of personality traits with Mark Watney, the protagonist of Weir’s debut novel The Martian.  Like Watney, Jasmine “Jazz” Bashara is foul-mouthed, resourceful, and ridiculously competent.  Jazz makes a living on Artemis, the first city built on the Moon, as a porter and sometimes-smuggler.  She gets drawn into a larger scheme of industrial sabotage that ends up endangering the whole city.  

Despite having a larger cast of characters who all seem to love Jazz, this novel has less heart than The Martian and Jazz’s antics are less endearing.  Whereas Watney struggled for his survival against tremendous odds, he did it through no fault of his own, so the more grating aspects of his personality were more forgivable, seemed more in keeping with the tone of the novel and the stakes of the narrative.  Artemis doesn’t have the same heart.  In some ways, Weir raises the stakes by putting the entire city in danger instead of one lone man, but this also abstracts it.  Rather than thinking of this as Jazz’s success in saving the city, it is hard to forget that she is also the one who brought the underlying dangers to a head.  It is true that there were some criminal elements that would likely have brought about a similar end, but then it would have been someone else’s fault.  Just because it could have been someone else’s fault doesn’t mean that Jazz is any less to blame.  

Weir does balance out the thriller narrative with the same kind of hard science detail that made The Martian successful.  He also creates an interestingly layered city in Artemis.  Perhaps the most interesting parts of the novel are those in which Jazz describes the living conditions and the ultra-capitalist founding of the city.  The populace is also deeply stratified and Jazz is constantly aware of the socio-economic realities that make a city on the Moon possible, namely tourist dollars, exploitation of natural resources, and exploitation of immigrant labor.  

I liked the book overall but look forward to the Weir novel that has a more down to Earth narrator.

Civilwarland in Bad Decline by George Saunders

This collection of short stories and one novella by George Saunders is pretty typical fare for those familiar with his work.  Usually the stories involve some sort of speculative of soft sci-fi premise, people with some sort of physical deformity, or some kind of mental deficiency.  He recombines a lot of elements that can, at times, be very defeatist.  About halfway through this book I thought it might be getting a little too down for me, which was an odd feeling for me because there was a time in my life when this would have fired a lot of synapses for me.

But I got to Bounty, the novella at the end of the novel and it turned around a bit.  The story is about enslavement of “flaweds,” people with physical mutations, in a post-collapse America.  This story is about the escape of one of these flaweds, his search for his sister, and his eventual journey to join an armed rebellion.  The content of the story didn’t differ so much from many of Saunders’ other works but the overall approach was different enough and struck just enough of a hopeful chord that it turned me around on the book.

The Writing Life, by Annie Dillard

I have gotten more interested in reading books about writing in the last few years.  I read a number of these back when I was taking creative writing classes in college (undergrad years) but had strayed from it since then.  Dillard’s book is short and ponderous.  She uses observations and personal stories to write about the experience of writing.  There are some powerful moments in the the book and I found portions of this to be very inspiring.  One of the things that stuck out to me is the way that she builds writing into daily life and also the way that she views this life as one of artistry that is removed form experience.  For Dillard, the writer is someone who is separate from the romanticized image of a worldly person experiencing all of life, but is actually a person who spends a lot of time alone in a room imagining these experiences.  

The best piece of advice that I took from this book is to put everything into the current project.  She advises against holding back for the next project or for some later date.  Use it up, I am paraphrasing, and the next project will take care of itself.

The City in the Middle of the Night, by Charlie Jane Anders

Not a bad book.  There is a lot of really creative world-building in this novel about human life adapting to a new planet.  Anders sets the novel in the late stages of an Earth settlement on January.  The people of two cities, Xiosphant and Argela, survive in very different ways, according to the customs of the city and the Earthly heritage of the occupants.  But things are on the decline as the environment deteriorates around them.  One of the central characters makes contact with an alien intelligence, and rebellion starts breaking out everywhere.

There is a lot of adventure in this and the descriptions are lush.  This book might edge a little closer to fantasy than I normally care for, but it was a good read.